Awesome stuff
First thing though- The guy two comments down, I know it may be disappointing that you can't find the usual nubbin sound on this song, but straying from certain styles is a great thing, and sometimes can find more success with it. Also keep in mind that he has just started with FL, things could be a little different.
Now on to the song. I felt the intro could use a little more in it, as the simple chiptune melody just didn't cut it for me. But of course, that's just me. I also felt the ending, which was awesome, still had something didn't like. I think breakcore music should focus on the breakcore, and not have a melody overpower the breakcore. But again, it's just my opinion. Overall however, it was great, and I expect more awesome tunes from you :)